Hey scott this is rique from instargram. I really like the angles you chose here. A big point if advice I recieved and think it will help you is avoid using too many medium shots. I think you can really make the page stick out more and have more drama even you used some close up and extreme collose ups. All together some pretty solid work. Actually you should consider posting on penciljack. I do sometimes and always get some good critiques on there.